新課標高考英語短文改錯真題 

2018-2015

真題呈現

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪改或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（Λ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.

正確答案

1.begin改為begun.

2.wait改為waiting.

3.and改為or.

4.eager take 中間加to.

5.myself改為my或者the.

6. that去掉。

7.larger改為large.

8. include 改為includes.

9.mistake改為mistakes.

10. Immediate改為Immediately.

答案解析

1.考查謂語動詞的時態。從全文及本句It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin中可知，全文以過去時為基調。為并列句第一句為并列句，第二個分句用過去完成時，但表達形式不對，錯誤地寫成了had begin，應該為had begun。

2.考查了非謂語動詞的用法。在文句Everyone was silent, wait to see...處，Everyone was silent作為句子的主體，wait to see...要做句子的伴隨狀語，以此可以判斷was作為句子的謂語，wait則要用非謂語動詞形式waiting。

拓展：短語結構做狀語的考查是高考熱點，其主要有：分詞結構，名詞短語，形容詞短語；獨立主格等。

3考查連詞的用法。此題要明確and和or的區別。and和or最大的區別在于,or 表示兩者只取其一,and 表示兩者皆是.and是“和”的意思表示事物之間的并列,而or是或者的意思表示事物間的選擇,二選一,選擇句容易出現在疑問句中。

4.考查了非謂語的用法。Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity處，可以確定出were為句子的謂語，take part in 作為動詞短語，則用非謂語形式，作狀語。根據句中謂語動詞和非謂語動詞的動作先后關系，此處用不定式，即to take part in .

5.考查代詞的用法。根據do one's homework，所以one's在句中用形容詞物主代詞，結合主語I，則I had done myself homework 處，把“myself”改為my。同時my的用法可以用the替代。因此，myself改為the或者my.

6.考查非謂語動詞和關系代詞that的用法。 分析I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people此句，可以明確的是：此句為簡單句，was為謂語，to speak為非謂語，作狀語，且to speak與主干直接相連，不需要關系代詞that。同時that作關系代詞時，引導句子。綜合以上分析，此句中的that需要去掉。

7.考查了形容詞的級的用法。I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people的句意為：我害怕在一大群人面前講話。顯然句子沒有比較的概念，因此larger改為large.

8.考查詞性轉換。The classroom is a place for learning and that include leaning from textbooks ，and mistake as well.此句句子相對較長，分析時要會斷句。句子分為The classroom is a place for learning和 and that include leaning from textbooks ，and mistake as well兩部分。and that include leaning from textbooks ，and mistake as well處和前面部分為并列句。后句中that做主語，include作謂語，要用單數形式：includes.

9.考查了可數名詞復數形式。從from textbooks ，and mistake 處分析，一個非常典型的衡結構，mistake 要與 textbooks 對應，改成復數形式：mistakes.

10.考查詞性轉換。分析 Immediate, I raised my hand處， Immediate處在狀語位置，應該為：Immediately.副詞(adv)修飾動詞(v)，形容詞(adj)，副詞(adv)，以及整個句子。

真題譯文

那是星期一上午，寫作課才剛開始。大家都默不作聲，等著看誰會被叫來大聲朗讀他或者她的段落。我們中的一些人很自信，也很渴望達到標準。 在課堂活動中，其他人緊張而焦慮。我自己做了作業，但我很害羞。我害怕在一大群人面前講話。就在那一刻，我想起了我的父親曾經說過：“教室是學習的地方，包括學習課本，也包括錯誤。”立刻，我舉起了我的手。

新課標高考英語短文改錯真題

（2017新課標I）

In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.

（2017新課標II）

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（2017新課標III）

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（2016新課標III）

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（2015全國I卷）

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（2015全國II卷）

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參考答案

（2017新課標I）

1 eighteen-eighteenth 2 添加the/my 3 so-but/yet 4 goes-went 5 word-words 6 Turning-Turn 7 刪除much 8 late-later 9 suddenly-sudden 10 on-of

（2017新課標II）

1 all-both或者刪除 2 a-an/one 3 interesting-interested 4 that-which 5 earlier-early 6 刪除for 7 Beside-Besides 8 informations-information 9 came-comes 10 添加to

（2017新課標III）

1 刪除of 2 had-have 3 and-but 4 took-taken 5 become-became 6 添加this/the 7 they-that/which 8 difference-different 9 late-latest 10 your-my

（2016新課標I）

1 that-where 2 刪除but或改為yet 3 had-have 4 honest-honesty 5 or-and 6 using-used 7 添加of 8 the-a 9 our-his 10 steady-steadily

（2016新課標II）

1 how-what 2 chose-choose 3 take-taking 4 but-and 5 添加the 6 your-our 7 knowledges-knowledge 8 can-should或刪除 9 thought-think 10 many-much

（2016新課標III）

1 year-years 2 worse-worst 3 刪除the 4 yourself-myself 5 such-so 6 tell-told 7 freely-free 8 wear-wearing 9 to -for 10 添加I

（2015全國I卷）

1 think-thought 2 添加the 3 or-and 4 on-with 5 刪除been 6 seriously-serious 7 airs-air 8 Much-many 9 found-find 10 your-our/the

（2015全國II卷）

71. parent改為parents 72. on改為in 73. very去掉 74. looks改為looking75. where改為that 76. begun改為began 77. telling改為told 78. a改為the79. saw后加his 80. terrible改為terribly